Writing Talent Development week 5

Today at Enrich, we did some more on our stories for Talent Development. I have deleted some, edited a chunk, added a paragraph, looked up the thesaurus for more interesting words, and worked really hard to make my story perfect. After morning tea, Katie showed us how to use Garage Band, a computer program, because some of us [E.G: ME!] didn't know how to use it. All of us are PROBABLY going to use Garage Band to make our stories into movies for the MADE awards. I am really excited about learning how to use Garage Band!